First person
When I was sitting down to my seat in lass room, I saw a mouse come out in front of me. It was so ugly with huge teeth and a tail. The mouse was figuring out something to eat in the trash. It smelled badly with body odor. I thought that I was so lucky to be a human. In my point of view, I was dislike the mouse because the mouse was so ugly, and I thought that it would bring me a disease such as a plague.On the other hand, the mouse thinks that I was so ugly to make the people are afraid of me. After that, I tried to hide and I don't want to appear to see people because of my ugly face.
Third person
As the mouse came down to the class, all of people looked up the mouse with screaming. Some people they tried to get out from the class. Some of them they tried to get out the mouse from the class . A girl of them was shock when she saw the big mouse came down to the class .
Tuesday, June 16, 2009
First person and third person story
Posted by robbin at 11:09 AM
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I think this is pretty good. I like the story and the imagination of the different point of views.
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